The snowman
You were bored, On that dull Snowy night. You were there, Sitting on your freezing cold bed. You were so keen for christmas dawn you were waiting for it to be seven am, when all your nice presents would be waiting for you. suddenly you heard a small noise on your door. Knock Knock Knock .
You scaredly stayed on your old, grose bed. After a while you Cautiously tiptoed to your door, Not knowing what might pop out of that thing is as old as the dinosaurs. Then, Once again, A small noise will come from your dusty door. You are starting to get anxiety because you don’t know what might be there waiting for you. When you open the door you find… A small snow man staring right at you? You think that this is possibly the most terrifying night of your life. You will stand there, Weirdly, Staring into his pitch black eyes. You wonder, What might be going on in this snowman's mind.
You decide to get a bit closer. You quickly touch him, Seeing if he would do something vicious. Nothing happens. You decide to go to bed and get some rest. Early in the morning you eagerly get out of your bed and go to your nice,warm lounge with a huge surprise! Not a good surprise though. You will figure someone took your gifts and Christmas tree.
When you open the woolly socks, Hoping to find some gifts With glee as you open up your favorite video game. Suddenly you hear a dozen of coal. After a few minutes Yet again, you will hear another knock on the door. You rush to open the door as you open it you find tens of thousands of snowmen. It looked as if someone made a snow man and duplicated it 10,000 times. You are so shocked that you quickly sprinted inside and cautiously walked upstairs to your parents. you tell your parents about the icy, terrifying snowman. Your parents will say to you that you are talking nonsense but in your brain you knew what you had seen. After that day you will make don’t stay up at 3 am on Christmas eve. Then you walk down stairs, Go into your room and you see snowmen to…
The End
Kia Ora Caleb!
ReplyDeleteAbdi here from room 25.
I really like how you've described every detail and that you've used great punctuation and made the story thrilling. Maybe next time you could check your work again to see if there are any spelling errors. What did you enjoy about making this writing?
Thanks for sharing!
Blog ya later
Genki Abdi,
ReplyDeletethank you for the tip Abdi.
Blog you later, Caleb